The Balance of Sentiment.

in Freewriters26 days ago


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I am not rational,
nor ruthless,
I would define myself as more sentimental.

Order and logic
persuade my irrationality,
finding comfort
in this discomfort.

I value emotions
through imagination,
seeking in introspection
the mysterious sublime.

Symmetry and balance
obscure my art,
with my lens, I uncover
expression in feelings.

Deep sensations,
sometimes complex,
I find and lose myself.

I am attracted to wild nature,
perhaps I will find refuge
from the socialized city.

At the center, personal expression,
in search of creative emphasis,
sometimes emerges.

What is your creative degree?
Ordered or disordered,
90, 180, or 360?

Harmonic proportion,
disordered freedom,
dream and madness.

Such a desire to break
traditional conventions.

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Thank you for reading @ibesso, the idea for the drawing is mine but I had it drawn by my virtual assistant.

It's Saturday, June 8th, 2:51 PM.
I'm feeling good, and a sweet melody is soothing my soul.

I want to share this moment that evokes and reminds me of sentimentalism @wakeupkitty @yaladeeds @freewritehouse @xiao-aine

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Those pictures look like cards, are these Yin & Yang birds? I like them just like your words good for another awakening.

Sentimental? Perhaps but it sounds more as if you show all emotions you have with this piece of poetry.

You described high intelligence.

It's good to read you are feeling well and there are sweet melodies soothing your soul.

🤗❤️🍀

I wonder about the ruthless how about change of lens? Order and logic sounds like the teacher of 1st grade.:/
Stay healthy, it's the year of the dragon

My poem was a poetic attempt to express the contrast between neoclassical order and romantic emotion, exploring the tension between rationality and feeling. I am happy that it is the Year of the Dragon because it will bring transformation and new opportunities.

I write and read but no books. Poetry is hard to understand. I hope the dragon will bring you what you need.


Poetry
is a deep enigma.
I hope
the Dragon brings luck
to you and me
on a journey
of endless dreams.
👋

Nothing so difficult as finding the right words to express emotions. You managed to do it!

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