Here take my hand.... (Contest.. Monster)

in Freewriters19 days ago (edited)

What is that?
Someone singing.
Oh what a sad song.

"Hi, How are you?"
"Not so good.
My heart is breaking."

They seem to me
to be inside a
mental box.

Maybe I can help them
break free
I can try.

"I'm sad to hear, My friend,
that you are suffering"
Why? What happened."

"I made a lot of mistakes.
I was selfish.
I used people."

"My actions, I was a monster,
put me inside this box
and I can't get out."

"You can get out.
I'll help you.
Here take my hand."

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At first peeking out
then slowly emerging
little bit little bit.

Voila! They were out of the box
smiling and feeling
very strong.

But, still holding my hand
they tried to drag me
into the box.

I fought
with all my strength
and pulled away.

Dazed and confused
"No! No!
What are you doing?"

They answered
"What do you expect?
I am a monster after all ."

(Adapted from Bengali folk lore....)

Contest. https://steemit.com/hive-135004/@wakeupkitty/contest-or-monster-out-of-the-box-25-steem-uvf

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Creo que todos en algún momento nos sentimos abrumados por los errores o faltas cometidas a lo largo de nuestras vidas; superar esos pensamientos no resulta fácil. Sin embargo, todo mostruo puede conseguir una mano amiga que lo haga salir de la oscuridad para hallar la luz.

Me encantó leerte. Saludos.

Yes. It doesn't have to be a failure. Just there is way to do it so you don't get dragged into their nightmare. Thank you for the words of encouragement. https://www.google.com/search?client=avast-a-2&q=translate&oq=translate&gs_lcrp=EgZjaHJvbWUyBggAEEUYOTIGCAEQRRhBMgYIAhAAGEAyBggDEAAYQDIGCAQQABhAMgYIBRAAGEAyBggGEAAYQDIGCAcQABhA0gEIMjA4N2owajGoAgCwAgA&ie=UTF-8

You should post this is the community @hive-135004 - knack4buzz

I love your entry!

Been there? Done that?
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You posted in "freewriters" - you can copy past it in knack4buzz - usually they delete the wrong entry and write error in the title. I try to replace it for something else.

tomorrow I moderate

Here is an entry - he doesn't feel too well right now

https://steemit.com/hive-135004/@ibesso/monster-out-of-the-box-or-the-box-on-my-mind

Where can I find other entries in your contest? Is there alist somewhere?

A great entry. You should leave your link underneath the contest of wakeupkitty.
Good luck!

Thank you.. Keep on.. keeping on.

Congratultions with your Monster Out of the Box Prize

UVF is on the way, so is your Steem

A great Sunday,
K.

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