Concurso de escritura de cuentos 123 de @xpilar (parte 2) Escape a la coloniaZ-15 (Español / English)

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Segunda parte

Escape a la colonia Z-15

Yako, el Lider, salió enloquecido de aquella cápsula, el ahogo le impedía expresar su rabia. El tiempo del oxígeno se había agotado. Los hombres no podían abrir la cápsula, la compuerta se había trabado.
—¡Traigan la barra que se va asfixiar! — dijo alguien.
El Líder oía las voces, pero como si estuviera muy lejos, hasta que la puerta cedió y él pudo sentir el aire frío llenar sus pulmones.
—¡Es el líder! —gritaron los presentes, — él no iba en la nave.
Un hombre entrado en años, pero con un carácter firme lo sacudió.
—¡YaKo! ¡YaKo! ¿Qué pasó?
—¡Déjame agarrar oxígeno Rander!
—¡Hay que llevarlo adentro!
—¡Sí señor!
Jeison en ese momento atravesaba una lluvia de estrellas que golpeaban con su luz la oscuridad del firmamento.
—¿Ahora que sigue Jeison?
—Debemos salir de esta zona y poner rumbo a la colonia X-12, allí podemos conseguir alimento para llegar a Z-15, esa colonia es nueva, allí podemos comenzar otra vida.
—¿Crees que nos dejaran entrar?
—Claro que si amigo, ahora debemos bloquear los sistemas de comunicación.
—Ya se está trabajando en eso, tenemos a los ingenieros mejor preparados.
—Ya estamos saliendo de la lluvia de estrellas, ¡Gino! anda y revisa cómo va la extracción de los chips, está nave debe tener localizadores, hay que conseguirlos, lo más pronto posible.

Yaco estaba reunido en la estación de salud de la colonia, ya se había recuperado. El hombre de rostro hermético lo oía con el mayor detenimiento, él era miembro principal del consejo de seguridad.
—Yako, sigues siendo el Líder y debes buscar la solución, ya pasé el informe al comando de la colonia central, han declarado la emergencia, pero me hicieron saber que tú sigues al mando y respetaran tu decisión.
—Te agradezco la confianza, pero ¿ahora qué vamos a hacer Rander? necesito tu consejo.
—Ya están preparando las naves de emergencia, son más pequeñas y más rápidas, todos podemos ir, los buscaremos y los destruiremos. ¿Qué va a pasar con esta Colonia?
—En unos días más será inhabitable, para estar aquí necesitaríamos trajes especiales y no los tenemos, la declararemos estación inhóspita, ¡ahora prepárense que nos vamos!
Por las pantallas pudieron ver como las alarmas se encendieron en la Colonia, esto significaba que ya había cumplido su ciclo de vida útil, por eso se estaban creando otras colonias. El Líder sabía que los campos de fuerza ya no iban a impedir su destrucción.

—Jeison hemos terminado de extraer los chips, hay algunas personas que tienen daños irreversibles y tuvieron que ser encapsulados, es lamentable, el universo será su tumba…
—¡Jeison! ¡Jeison, tenemos problemas! —entró un hombre apurado, —¡hemos detectado movimiento entre las colonias X-5 y Y-9!
—¿Qué tipo de movimiento?
—Son naves de rapiña, se usan para destruir.
—Quiere decir que nos van a atacar, para eso se usan o para neutralizar posibles enemigos, tenemos que prepararnos, apaguen todos los sensores, sé qué es un peligro para nosotros, pero no podemos dejar que nos ubiquen.
—Jeison, ¿Estás seguro? Podemos perdernos y caer en un gusano estelar.
—Tenemos que llegar a la colonia Z-15, si nos ubican aquí, estamos perdidos, aquí no podemos hacer nada. ¡Apaguen los sensores! y traten de calmar a la gente, no pueden entrar en pánico.
La nave se hizo sombra, parecía una roca flotante en la oscuridad infinita Se podría decir que iban como a la deriva, empujada por la inercia interestelar.
—¡Jeison! —le hablo Gino, —encontramos pequeñas naves de emergencia ocultas en esta gran nave.
—Eso es maravilloso, pues tengo un plan que puede resultar, entre los tripulantes hay navegadores con experiencia ellos podrán llegar a la colonia. ¡búsquenlos!
Cuando la nave se acercó a la colonia Z-15, recibieron la orden del líder de la nueva colonia para que detuvieran el descenso, tenía que ser revisada, los navegadores abrieron la rampa y varios robots soldados entraron primero, luego entró Yako, El líder.
—¿Dónde están?
—¿A quiénes se refiere señor? —le dijo uno de los navegadores.
—A Jeison y su grupo.
—Ellos, ya no están en esta nave.
—¡Eso no es posible! Los vi robar la nave y casi me matan.
—Ellos se contaminaron y fueron encapsulados y arrojados al espacio, pueden revisar.
—¡Revisen todo! —gritó el Líder.
Luego de un largo tiempo, los robots presentaron los informes y el Líder casi pierde el control.
—Señor, no se puede hacer nada, —le dijo Rander.
Cuando la nave desciende, todos los colonos de Z-15 los reciben con alegría y el Líder de la nueva colonia dio la orden de llevarlos a la estación de salud para su chequeo, él, estaba muy contento porque no tenía suficiente gente para poblar aquel asteroide y esta era una gran oportunidad.
En una lejana Colonia Jeison fue recibido como un héroe junto a su equipo, Yako tuvo que regresar a la estación central para rendir cuentas.
Jeison sabía que aquello no había terminado, por ahora era necesario desaparecer y seguir trabajando en función de mejorar la existencia de todas aquellas colonias inhóspitas.
—¿Pensando Jeison?
—Sí amigo, el universo es demasiado grande, pero no podemos regresar a la tierra.

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PART 2

Escape to Colonia Z-15

Yako, the Leader, came out of the capsule in a frenzy, choking and unable to express his rage. The oxygen time had run out. The men could not open the capsule, the hatch had jammed.
-Bring the bar, he's going to suffocate! - someone said.
The Leader heard the voices, but as if he were far away until the door gave way and he could feel the cold air fill his lungs.
-It's the leader! -shouted those present, "he was not on the ship.
A man in his old age, but with a firm character shook him.
-YaKo! YaKo! What happened?
-Let me get some oxygen, Rander!
-Let's get him inside!
-Yes, sir!
Jeison at that moment was passing through a shower of stars that were hitting the darkness of the firmament with their light.
-Now what's next Jeison?
-We must leave this area and head for colony X-12, there we can get food to get to Z-15, that colony is new, and there we can start another life.
-Do you think they will let us in?
-Of course, they will, my friend, now we must block the communication systems.
-We are already working on that, we have the best-prepared engineers.
-Gino! Go and check how the extraction of the chips is going, this ship must have locators, we must get them as soon as possible.

Yaco was gathered at the colony's health station, he had already recovered. The man with the hermetic face listened to him with the greatest attention, he was the main member of the security council.
-Yako, you are still the Leader and you must look for a solution, I already passed the report to the central colony command, and they have declared the emergency, but they let me know that you are still in command and they will respect your decision.
-I thank you for your confidence, but what are we going to do now, Rander? I need your advice.
-They are already preparing the emergency ships, they are smaller and faster, and we can all go, we will look for them and destroy them. What will happen to this colony?
-In a few more days it will be uninhabitable, to be here we would need special suits and if we don't have them, we will declare it an inhospitable station, now get ready, we are leaving!
Through the screens they could see how the alarms were turned on in the Colony, this meant that it had already fulfilled its useful life cycle, and that's why other colonies were being created. The Leader knew that the force fields were no longer going to prevent their destruction.

-Jeison we have finished extracting the chips, there are some people who have irreversible damage and had to be encapsulated, it is unfortunate, the universe will be their tomb...
-Jeison! -Jeison, we have problems! -a man entered in a hurry, -we have detected movement between colonies X-5 and Y-9!
-What kind of movement?
-They're raptor ships, they're used to destroy.
-He means they are going to attack us, that's what they are used for or to neutralize possible enemies, we have to prepare ourselves, and turn off all sensors, I know it's a danger for us, but we can't let them locate us.
-Jeison, are you sure? We could get lost and fall into a star worm.
-We have to get to the Z-15 colony, if they locate us here, we're lost, we can't do anything here. Turn off the sensors! and try to calm the people down, so they can't panic.
The ship became a shadow, it looked like a floating rock in the infinite darkness. You could say that they were drifting, pushed by the interstellar inertia.
-Jeison! -Gino spoke to him, -we found small emergency ships hidden in this great ship.
-That's wonderful, because I have a plan that can work, among the crew, there are experienced navigators, and they can reach the colony. look for them!
As the ship approached the Z-15 colony, they received the order from the leader of the new colony to stop the descent, it had to be checked, the navigators opened the ramp and several robot soldiers entered first, then Yako entered, The leader.
-Where are they?
-Who are you referring to sir? -One of the navigators told him.
-Jeison and his group.
-They are no longer on this ship.
-That's not possible! I saw them steal the ship and they almost killed me.
-They were contaminated and were encapsulated and thrown into space, you can check.
-Check everything! -shouted the Leader.
After a long time, the robots presented the reports and the Leader almost lost control.
-Sir, nothing can be done," Rander told him.
When the ship descended, all the colonists of Z-15 received them with joy and the Leader of the new colony gave the order to take them to the health station for a checkup, he was very happy because he did not have enough people to populate that asteroid and this was a great opportunity.
On a distant colony, Jeison was greeted as a hero with his team, and Yako had to return to the central station to be accountable.
Jeison knew that it was not over, for now, it was necessary to disappear and continue working to improve the existence of all those inhospitable colonies.
-Thinking Jeison?
-Yes my friend, the universe is too big, but we can't go back to earth.



Esta es la segunda parte de la historia de este concurso, aquí dejo el enlace de la primera parte:
This is the second part of the story of this contest, here is the link to the first part:
https://steemit.com/hive-185836/@silher/concurso-de-escritura-de-cuentos-123-de-xpilar-rebelion-en-la-colonia-cuento-rebellion-in-the-colony-story


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 2 years ago 

WOW, this is well written @silher
I immersed myself in the story like I was watching a movie

I'm glad you liked it, it was such a rush to do it because I didn't expect to make a second part, thank you very much for that appreciation, greetings @xpilar.

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