Hopefully this is more of the content we can expect to see from you. You did start off on the wrong foot by spamming all over the place and i hope you learned that is not how this platform works. You need to spend time making quality comments on people's blogs so that you can get noticed and get a following. A lot of new people get frustrated because no one votes on their stuff, but if you spend a few weeks commenting and getting to know people and them getting to know you, you will have a better understanding on how Steemit works and your posts will be a lot better and you will have built up a nice following by then as well. Good luck.
thank you for the critics yup i will do some good stuff for the future