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RE: The Girl and the Pendulum (An Original Story – Part 15)

in #fiction7 years ago

...was not the droid he was looking for.

You had me right there. I don't know if you meant for that to foreshadow the hypnosis, but it surely did, in a really clever way. Well done. I'm following.

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That's the line that got me too! Curse these nerdish leanings! Lol

Great catch! Kind of a foreshadowing + an Easter egg! :)

Seriously, you did that on purpose? Man. I'm even more impressed.

It's the way of the Jedi... LOL