Thought of a fifteen year old girl

in #poem7 years ago (edited)

recently I come across a two year old #poetic style comment on a blog of one of my new favourites , the girl who commented may be around 15 when she wrote some of these #beautiful lines which brings the must needed #freshness to the #stressful lives we all are living

Heaven and Hell, is believed by the ones who have a broken shell . Of all the real things they could believe, They choose to believe the thing that could decieve. Heaven and Hell are here,not There.Goods and Sins are here , not There.

Think of your life,not afterlife, Be it good,Be it sin,live your life. Fiction is too good to be true, Heaven or hell has got no clue. We are matter,that doesn't matter, Just like the people's chatter.

We're doomed if we believe,For all the sins we can't leave. We're doomed if we don't believe, cause, we only live once,that would mean. I believe in God,But not in this odd. Cause this life is all we have, And we got no afterplans.

This short #poem has really touched my #life.Seriously, this lass will definetely become one of the greatest #philosopher ever exist on earth

do.gif

Show less

Sort:  

Congratulations @marwah! You have completed some achievement on Steemit and have been rewarded with new badge(s) :

Award for the number of comments

Click on any badge to view your own Board of Honor on SteemitBoard.
For more information about SteemitBoard, click here

If you no longer want to receive notifications, reply to this comment with the word STOP

By upvoting this notification, you can help all Steemit users. Learn how here!

I really like this. Nice one

I think it's true. I totally agree with this girl, there is no limit to the fear of heaven or hell, you have to live. Excellent publication.

Unfortunately, we all are living in that fear in some way or another but what we need is to find the way out of that life

Congratulations! This post has been randomly Resteemed! For a chance to get more of your content resteemed join the SteemEngine network!

Congratulations @marwah! You have completed some achievement on Steemit and have been rewarded with new badge(s) :

Award for the number of comments received

Click on any badge to view your own Board of Honor on SteemitBoard.
For more information about SteemitBoard, click here

If you no longer want to receive notifications, reply to this comment with the word STOP

By upvoting this notification, you can help all Steemit users. Learn how here!

Really thoughtful poem.So much meaning attached.I am glad i came across this.Thanks for sharing.

Please check out my introductory post
https://steemit.com/introduce/@stephenpaul/perfect-christmas-gift-first-100-followers-merry-christmas-friends
Thanks a lot

very nice and heart touching poem