Beautiful... there's a mounting suspense to this poem, a music made of words, that builds as you read, like an electrical charge that is released with the last line.
Beautiful... there's a mounting suspense to this poem, a music made of words, that builds as you read, like an electrical charge that is released with the last line.
Hey @titus-andronicus! I'd be honored if you'd consider contributing a couple of lines to the collaborative poem I started, just for fun and to build community, in the poetry section of Steemit: https://steemit.com/poetry/@bennettitalia/steemit-collaborative-poetry-experiment
This is just a fun experiment, and it's already getting pretty silly, but I'd love to hear what you'd add to it :) My goal for this is to start a series of similar "exquisite corpse" poems, maybe one per week, on different themes, to bring the poetry community together, and to do a video with each finished poem, with attributions. We'll see if this first one even gets off the ground :D
Thank you for your kind comments! Yes, I'll definitely consider contributing to your collab poem! Thanks for inviting me!