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RE: EVERYTHING IS A BUBBLE

in #poetry6 years ago

This poem is a really well thought out expression of loss @abmakko. I really admire these lines:

A new life, A newborn, A new promise.
Slowly rising till it peaks and drops to dust.

A new love, A sweetheart, An heartrob.
The love candle burns away with melting wax.

and the ending as well. The extended metaphor of the bubble is handled well and comes through, lending a truly heart rending poingency to the whole poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Thanks for your always insightful commentary @raj808 . :-), the bubble is indeed very fragile