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RE: POETRY | DAY 28 | Musical Chairs

Great @naquoya. I like the flow and the story. Just enough set up and then punch line:

"If only you were more like..."
He stopped listening at this point
Musical chairs going around in his head

Thank you for putting this familiar story in poetic form.

BTW ... I met a Japanese student today. He told me he was from Naqouya. I was glad we had something in common.

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Thanks for reading @mineopoly. Maybe I should travel to Japan then, see if there is a connection of sorts for me there. Life can work in strange ways like that, sometimes.

Take your time @naquoya. You are in the same time zone I think so it would be worth a visit. Life is rushed in Korea. I have been to Japan a few times and found it strangely quiet.

(Wow... I finally got a 1 cent upvote out of 10%. Things are getting back to normal.)