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RE: LINES THAT NO MORE BIRTH JOY (#Day 44)

This pen runs on for the desolation to come
My ink flows for the melee 'twil bring
No more will this vocal pen bear barren words
I drew pity for a soul

All lines and stanzas are well written but the above is definitely my favorite. Without a doubt this is a great read.

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@vegaron, this piece stayed in me for a while before finding it's way out of my mind through my ink.... I'm happy hour really love it