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RE: Nine Lanes

in #writing7 years ago

@ellievallie I means your script is insane... Like while reading your article it was like i could feel her. She was just beside me, the slow heartbeat when she was entering the pool and a steady increase in it gradually increasing and as her heartbeat increased same was going on with me. The way she was breathing while swimming amazing. INSANE.