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Stopping just when the reader's tongue is hanging out for more is a good writer's stock in trade. But an instrument of exquisite refined mental torture in the hands of (I was going to say Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade) a genius.

In my head, I think Marilyn would be into him, all he needs to do is take that first brave step of giving her green light. He should stop imagining and just act!!! Lol