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RE: SHORT STORY - Lena and the Band of Assassins - Part 04
Cool, yeah I get ya.
I wrote it how I wanted to write it though, the idea was this slow and methodical "descent" into madness, with the pauses "." between each "they". It's not frantic, it's slow and calculating. But ye, I could have done it differently, and maybe it would of been better, in any case thanks for the response!
No, not about better. It is about improving. You did fantastic. It is all about playing and finding that fun side. You can always experiment that is my bigger point. It does not have to be perfect. It can be excellent though! Big difference. Love your work! If it resonates with your heart! Then it is excellent! It certainly resonates with others.
Thanks my dude, appreciate that.