What a lovely story. It's bard, but shows good storytelling skills. I really liked it, especially the part about Clara's world shattering.
i took that as her illusions shattering?
Really good work, do please continue writing.
And to help with that, here's the latest prompt: https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-138-5-minute-freewrite-tuesday-prompt-syrup