RE: Kingdoms Of The Knight --Chapter 2 The Intruder--------Please enjoy the second chapter of the story!!!

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penauthor (62)in #writing • 7 years ago

That was a great read and it's hard to think you're wanting further improvement.

I wonder what you'd say about my writing?

7 years ago in #writing by penauthor (62)

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linkboltus (48) 7 years ago (edited)

Sure, I'll read what you have. Anything in particular you wanna showcase?

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penauthor (62) 7 years ago

Alright. Thanks. Please take the liberty of of offering your criticism.

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linkboltus (48) 7 years ago

Keep in mind I'm not very good. Is there anything you want me to read?

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penauthor (62) 7 years ago

I'm no better. I will be glad though if you could read my last update and tell me what you think.

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