Harapan

in #aceh7 years ago

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Cerita kita, memang telah senja
Dulu, Kita bermimpi untuk hidup berdua
Hari dan malam kita saling merayu
Menambah mesra jalinan kita
Sepasang anak muda dimabuk cinta
Tapi, sekarang semua tampak ilusi
Harapan harapan kita telah sirna
Layaknya malam merenggut sinar
Kini hidup dalam bayang bayang kenangan
Kita hanya bisa saling berdoa
Takdir siapa tau...

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Sudah bagus. Akan lebih sempurna kalau sedikit lebih panjang

terimakasih masukannya 👍

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