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RE: ADSactly Short Story - And Die (story part 2)

in #adsactly6 years ago

Final lesson, @churchboy. It was necessary for Peter to have his lesson for having acted greedily. What I liked most about this story was the idea of the dream and how it could be saved by saying those magic words. I imagine the whole cultural imaginary of some peoples and it is inevitable not to feel curiosity. If there is still something that escapes man's intelligence, it is precisely what dreams are made of. In this story we see that it was Peter's faith in words that helped him get out. It is a pity that some people have to go through extreme and unpleasant experiences to learn the lesson. As always, hugs to you and many thanks to @adsactly for sharing your story.

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Thank you @nancybriti. I really needed him to be free for the sake of his wife and two daughters. Those were the victims of the story. Unfortunately, there was no way for him to walk away from the situation without a miracle and that came in the form of magic. Who knows what really happened? Maybe his desire to return his family was so strong that no forces could keep him back.

Thank you @nancybriti, for always being here.