NICE STORY. First sight love story. when you see a girl who welcomes a smile it will make us remember. And the story of Kalu who was so impressed with the grace made him always try to repeat meeting after meeting. And need loyalty and hope one day will be able to meet. and fortunately, in the story destiny finally brought them together. even if you don't need to try too hard to get the attention of the members and even the members who come in kindly. one thing that is really expected by us or when we are in Kalu position.
In my opinion, this story must have experienced, even though you made it as a fiction. from the detailed plot and background that makes this story so smooth and easy to follow. A story that describes the lives of teenagers hit by "monkey love".
but behind it all there is a moral value that we can learn from this story

1. first sight impresses us. Whether good or bad impressions will make us have an assessment of someone or something. That's why we need to give a good impression and then we have to prove that the first impression that is obtained is not wrong. We can be good forever.
2. do not break up hope
   In this life the dream, hope often makes us carried away in dreams. And if we can keep trying to realize that dream, there will come a dream come true. As in steemit it has been a hope to have something finally achieved.
3. Consistency
   In this story, it is so consistent to go to the terminal where he meets the member. There are important things from the consistency that he does. he was sure that one day he would be able to meet his consistent steps. And it turned out to be true.
   In life, of course we need consistency. If we do it with all out and consistency, then believe that God never sleeps to watch his people.

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Warm regard from Indonesia