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RE: ADSactly Short Stories - All for the money

in #adsactly6 years ago (edited)

GREAT POST !!! THE HANGING STORY. I like it.
@adsactly, you're really smart about choosing a writer under your banner. this time you choose a very interesting story. It starts from the death of a rich man and happens to have a young wife. then there was speculation about his death. Then everything is related to money.
We know money is not everything, but we need money. In the case of a story still in need of this solution we can see the possibilities. whether due to suicide with the consideration of an insurance inheritance, or murder with money motives committed by the perpetrator or someone else who has not been raised or conspiracy that the end of the culprit could be a close person. Helium balloon guides also allow for a way to resolve the conflict, but even then it is not necessarily.
you're a smart writer, @greenrun, tries to get the reader to determine the direction of the conflict and be asked to guess the end of the story. And it seems like the readers are all enjoying the developed flow.
unag as a conflict motive has been going on for a long time. Kit often sees business competition because of money. You broke up to kill each other for money. People ally and cooperate also because of money. Even corrupt criminals commit money because of money.
And even one of the reasons we join in Steemit there is also a reason for money.
So no wonder money is often a problem and we must be wise in responding.
WE NEED MONEY, BUT MONEY IS NOT EVERYTHING.

Thank you @greenrun
Thanks @adsactly
Thank you Steemit

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