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You need to copy the "image url" from steemimg.com , not the "image link" you have now .. So first one would be

Cool writeup though @desibeatnik , if you can sort out the images by pasting the image links over the top of the current ones (follow each link, find the box with "image url" in it, then paste it over the current link) then I'm happy to upvote and help spread it :)

Worst case if you're really struggling I guess I could login and fix it for you, opened fb chat if you needed help.. Glad to see you didnt give up :)

just saw this, thanks. I don't know maybe I'll try again tomorrow