First things first: Welcome to Steem! I'm really glad to have you here.

Now to the critique. My first wife was an artist, and often painted works in progress grey. She had canvases that were half an inch thick!. But the one thing I learned out of all of that is that my critique had no final impact, and in fact might piss her off. So. What I'm going to say is 'glad you are here'. I DO like the colors.