In shadows lurked. Original rhyming ramblings, doodles and images.

in #art7 years ago (edited)

A fine institution

They'd always say,

Claiming it's fortitude

Made strong by the Frey.

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Bribe can be art

At the onset no worse,

Just as long as the outcome's

A well rehearsed verse.

The streets of the city

Everywhere every nook,

The whispers are heard

Behind preaching look.

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The thieving

The thriving,

The success of seduction,

Concealing

Necrosis

Palace of destruction.

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You present like an angel

But secretly prey,

On the meek and the weary

While your prayers you say.

Such shame did you do carry

But the burden was great,

So you passed on your excess

They carried your weight.

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You question our ethics

Fortitude and pride,

To safeguard you stipped us

In depletion you hide.

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Concealed and diminished

But by no means done,

We're strong and we're fearsome

In the end won.

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As each little ripple

Can become a tide,

Each day you lament

Will reveal that you lied.

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You chose denial

When you landed in strife,

But I see who you are

And your loathsome wife.

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You thought you were clever

And cunning and smart,

All of the while

You concealed a black heart.

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You may never return here

You'll never be whole,

Forever be exiled

Can't buy back your soul.


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It is unfortunate, but I know that person you are writing about. Excellent thought provoking poem.

I'm sorry that you do. So many people know that person. They rely on silence, so thank you for your comment it has power.

Pipe dreamer? Hmmmm

Or perhaps I'll lift this one, it works for me too

shitty artist with a shitty aesthetic but alot of bigggggg DREAMS

ha you've found me out _

I have a problem I've read this like 3 times and I think I'm going to read it again

Don't dwell on it too much, it rolled out with little connection and surprised me with it's potency.
I used to do that a lot on steemit, and I looked like a very desperate person all the time. It is what my "art" looks like I'm afraid.
It was a real word salad and I went back and related the abstract themes and linked them with rhyming.

PS How can I not follow A shitty artist with a shitty aesthetic but alot of bigggggg DREAMS.

I'm expecting greatness

HOPE 😊❤️

HOPE 😊❤️

your art and drawing is very nice able..i appreciate to your every blog..best luck..resteemit done

Thank you for your kind words and resteem.

most welcome my friend..

Really beautiful art works and thanks for beautiful words too.

As each little ripple
Can become a tide,
This actually true. Little drops of water turns into an ocean. Your poem is deep and filled with hurt and pain. Hope all is fine.

All is fine I promise. Just insomniac freefalling words. I am Good.
The lines flowed out of there own accord.

Ok, just worried.

Thank you for your lovely concern. It made me pause and check out your posts.
Different themes can be challenging. I feel the first person reference to Mother quite challenging to read. The shamrock and feathers, admittedly benign to almost everyone, are "triggers" of a sort to me.

strong Irish heritage connections and bird phobia Ornithophobia.

I love your words. It's nice to find you.
Nigeria is finding a presence on steemit, I'm finding so many great writers.

I am in Australia. I find myself learning about geography and more importantly cultures. I assumed from the level of amazing writing on steemit that the first language is English. Google the god of knowledge just confirmed this.
I have learnt that it is extremely diverse linguistically in Nigeria though.
I've learnt something today, found a new steemian to follow and received a lovely message all before my morning coffee. You did that.

Thanks. 💜

Now to get some coffee.

Ps
This is the back story. It is long and potentially vicariously traumatic, so please don't feel obligated to read it.
I started steemit to host this particular story. I surprised myself when I attempted to write again and now I'm hooked on steem.

https://steemit.com/life/@girlbeforemirror/why-i-pledged-to-run-almost-300kms-for-a-man-i-had-never-met-who-had-accused-a-man-i-had-loved-all-my-life-of-the-most-heinous