Hi @kinegaofficial. I have a few suggestions regarding your article:

• Cite your images' source. Make sure you didn't violate any copyright law by using any of your images in this article. Please refer here if you're not familiar with what I was talking about.
• Cite your article references
• I realised you were using one tag. Use 5 tags to maximise your reader. You can click here to find out more.
• If it were up to me, I would keep an article to at least 500 words.
• Use the tag #steemstem for a science-related article. STEM refers to science, technology, engineering and mathematics. Do not use the tag if your content is not related to either of these 4.

If you have any problem regarding STEM-related articles, you can join steemSTEM Discord Channel and we will be glad to assist you.