(創作嘗試#1)STEEMIT有喜歡詩的同路人嗎?

in #cn • 7 years ago (edited)

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HELLO, first time submit a story on steemit, 只能說小弟我人如其名, 語文科不合格的人, 但非常喜歡詩, 唐伯虎是我最喜歡的詩人畫美詩美, 嘗試在這作詩找到同路人當然你的UPVOTE很重要(嘻嘻........), 大家多多指教吧!

以下兩首是我幾個月前作的, 有錯別字請讓我知道, 因為小弟認字不好

美酒

杯聲響樂夜夜笙 酒醉舞妓煙如燈
千乾傾去壼底盡 道別歸途與魂哼
卧床眠眠不由心 凝望黑黑真難分
驚醒在夢疑無盡 百死徘迴滿淚生

美人

婻婻笑我自難忘 映畫藏珍置一方
濛濛探愛獨配情 以詩獻妮為一傾⁠⁠⁠⁠
(超級尷尬)

喜歡不喜歡也讓我知道!
你的想法如何?

UPVOTE 我好嗎? UPVOTE 我好嗎? UPVOTE 我好嗎? UPVOTE 我好嗎? UPVOTE 我好嗎?

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