PAPA-PEPPER : A STAND UP GUY - "EVERYONE CALLS ME 'MEMO'"
I thought I'd try something a little different.
Since some people do find me to be humorous, I thought that I would record a little of @papa-pepper attempting some "stand up comedy." I've never really done anything like this before, and will be releasing a few short videos to see what people think. Please check it out if you can and let me know what you think. I'll probably post another one tomorrow.
EVERYONE CALLS ME 'MEMO'
As always, I'm @papa-pepper and here's the proof:
proof-of-standing-up
Until next time…
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Sort of reminds me of the "balloon animals". You are wonderful, but there are somethings you do better than others. Your point is well taken however.
Thanks for that.
If you keep practicing you will get really good at it. It has taken me 200+ youtube recipe videos to not be a deer in headlights when the camera turns on. I still have a long way to go but that's part of what keeps it fun.
#sweetconstructivecriticism i inject comedy into as much content as possible. Keep steeming along. I left a. Message on your YouTube @pappa-pepper Etrain ;)
Thanks!
I like this video
It seems more like a massage ,then comedy . Sorry for being so Blunt . A friend will always tell you what is true.
will see your next try and will let you know what I think
once again it's only my opinion
in every stand up comedy there is always a massage , and its great that you have tried .
In no means it's the end . I probabily would suck at it. looking forward to see you giving it another try
Please try again and we, your steemit fans can see how you progress
Thanks for telling me the truth. I was just trying something new, so I appreciate the honesty.
Massages are great, too. Part of comedy is setup. And massages relaxes people and prepares them for joyfulness, comedy, reflection, and encouragement.
good attempt, there's no problem with your presentation. i would have loved if you were standing in a better place, room looks tidy. waiting for your next one. thank you
IN 43 mint. you got 142$ wow just wow...
Good Work!!!
That's a good effort. But, I honestly didn't find it much impressive as a 'stand up comedy'. You narrated a story a comical way, and not a stand-up comedy. You could have script that with few beautiful punchline. I look forward to seeing more, and see you grow as a stand up comedian as well. And, that's quite a possible thing when you have such a good following. Best wishes @papa-pepper.
AH, so there's a difference between narrating a story in a comical way and stand up comedy? It seems that at least some of the stand up I used to watch was comedians narrating stories in comical ways... I'll have to do some research. Thanks for being honest.
Yes @papa-pepper. The difference is 'punchline'. I think your story was good but you missed the timing of punchline . You should try scripting with strong punches before going real. Cheers!
I actually disagree with that. I think scripting it makes it less organic.
Scripting for the content. It will sound blabbering otherwise.
Tit for tat. Just a Variance of opinion
True. Scripting can lead to static, robotic, depression.
Scripting can disconnect from emotion, connection, true heart.
Yeah, if I wanted that I would watch a news anchor
Not true. To script means to make a content (stronger), write a content- to be able to associate with the audience(s) as you begin a story-telling.
Love the way you took the shot.....great steemian @papa-pepper
Thanks for the encouragement!
125 dollars in 25 minutes of posting, this post may have broken your personal record. Keep up the good content papa! You deserve it!
I was quite impressed myself! Thanks!