POLIS: The Trial of Socrates - Finalizing some lettering

jpgaltmiller (55)in #comics • 6 years ago (edited)

My last post here asked about a font change I was thinking about. I didn't get a very large response, but I decided to make that change, and otherwise improve some of the lettering.

Take a look at the comparison:

Original

Revised

Original

Revised

I added some SFX, changed the font, massaged the bubbles, and slightly thickened up the panel borders.

What do you think? Improved, or am I spinning my wheels?

Art by Daniel Becker.

Previous colored pages: Page 14-15 | Page 16 | Page 17 | Page 18 | Page 19

Thanks for your support and any feedback! Your upvote is definitely appreciated. I hope you'll stick around and watch it all come together.

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6 years ago in #comics by jpgaltmiller (55)

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a-0-1 (-4)(1) 6 years ago

Please upvote: https://steemit.com/free/@bible.com/4qcr2i

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drwatson (69) 6 years ago

I like the revised one better, has a Greek-er feel to it, in my opinion.

Also come back to steem! Been missing you man! Fundition is dropping some big votes, you gotta get in on that!

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melooo182 (68) 6 years ago (edited)

Miss your posts man!
Hope you are doing well 😃

Also prefer the revised one, is more spaced and easier to read 👍👍

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