Constrained Writing Contest #18 + Winners of Constrained Writing Contest #17
Most writing contests give you a writing prompt or at least a couple of words to work your idea around, which is why I decided to host a slightly different contest.
A constrained writing contest
Instead of being given an idea or a writing prompt, you are allowed to choose the topic completely by yourself. But, varying from week to week, you will face different challenges that limit your writing.
You will be required to omit certain words, use a specific word in every second sentence, use a given sentence unchanged, write a story with a certain amount of words... or a combination of all.
In short, instead of telling you what to write about, you are told how to write.
Winners of constrained writing contest #17
This week we had a guest judge joining us, a person with experience with grading essays. Experience with showing no mercy. Give it up for @metzli!
Without further ado, here’s what she had to say about this week’s entries, and of course the winners of the Constrained Writing Contest #17:
Thank you for letting me be the judge this week. It was so much fun. I was a little nervous at the beginning because I only saw one entry and I thought, aaaaaaah! I broke @Svashta’s contest. It turns out I didn’t break the contest, but I did get to read lots of awesome stories.
- 1st place : 1.202 SBD + 0.306 STEEM : @simgirl with the entry “Misuse of knowledge”
Judge’s note: The story was entertaining, interesting, sad (yet oddly happy for the victim), and strongly woven with lessons and learning throughout. The biggest lesson being: Don’t try to do more than you are capable of, you’ll end up completely useless and a load on others.
- 2nd place : 0.721 SBD + 0.184 STEEM : @zen-art with the entry “A story about a boy who liked to read”
Judge’s note: It was a sweet love story, just in time for Valentine’s Day. The main character learned to say: “I do” and I re-learned that love can be simple and wordless (though there were lots of words - in the books). Perhaps that’s why I loved this story so much, Im a sucker for books, and reading… and son’s finding love.
- 3rd place : 0.481 SBD + 0.122 STEEM : @raiserxn with the entry “Learning The Hardest Things in Life”
Judge’s note: Third place was a little more difficult to choose, because there were so many awesome stories. I went with @raisorxn who went with a theme of learning to get along with others (at work) and reminded us that its more about how you can get along with people that we work with, than it is about knowing your job skills in and out. Job skills can be learned, but getting along with others (although can be learned too) is something that is expected right off the bat.
Honorable mentions in alphabetical order:
- @foragingquietude with the entry “Walking away".
- @iikanji with the entry "Old man Peters".
- @latino.romano with the entry "Shoemaker to your shoe".
- @niallon11 with the entry "Just a moment".
- @thelastsage with the entry titled “Learning is life”.
- @tibra with the longest entry we've ever had with this contest: “Pivotal”, that also has a pending continuation on the way.
- @somebuttstuff with the entry “James' Trip”.
- @spalatino with the entry “Journes” which takes place in an entirely new fictional world that @spalatino decided to continue working on. Check out their blog for the ongoing Saga!
Judge’s overall note: Please know that I read all the stories, some twice, some three times. I tried to leave comments on all the stories too.
@svashta’s note: I might be giving away a little too much now, and giving you an easy ticket to winning future contests judged by me, but I’m a sucker for stories that have a powerful and meaningful message. Something that sticks with you even long after you’re finished reading the story. Partly why I picked last week’s constraint with the existential question, and exactly the reason I enjoyed this week’s constraint so very much. Immersive stories with relatable characters have a way of portraying knowledge and life lessons in a completely different manner than your mundane everyday life.
Oh and, while you’re at it, please check out all the entries, they're all well worth your time! :D
With that out of the way, onto constrained writing contest #18!
Rules:
This week we have another guest judge joining us. Give it up for one of the first participants of the Constrained Writing Contest @eriesunkite!
This week she's flipping the contest upside down. Whereas you had to expose your characters to new situations in the last few weeks, @eriesunkite is all about the everyday mundane chores.... With a twist, of course.
Here are the rules she has come up with for this week;
- write a story about a deity doing something mundane and preferably struggling with it. In other words: write a story about the daily struggles of deities in the modern world.
What they do is completely up to you, just keep in mind that it has to be something many people do or at least can do. So no car racing or roof repairing for example. Driving around Walmart in one of those silly carts is okay though. Alright fine, you caught me. That last sentence was me, @svashta.
- Please pick minor, less known gods who don't already have a lot of stories about them. So no Zeus, Raa, Thor and the like.
- The story must be at least 250 words long and in English
@eriesunkite suggests you write your story in a Word document or another application/extension that automatically checks your spelling/grammar. I hear "Grammarly" does an okay job at that, but since I never used it myself, take this advice with a grain of salt.
And as for the usual mumbo jumbo, here's the rest of the rules just about every contest has:
- Upvote this post
- Post a link to your entry in the comments below
- Include tag #constrainedwriting among your other tags
- Should you wish to help raise awareness of the contest, please consider resteeming this post (it is by no means compulsory)
Prizes
- 1st place: 45% of post's payout
- 2nd place: 27% of post's payout
- 3rd place 18 % of post's payout
- Judge takes 5 % for his/her efforts
- I will take 5 % for hosting, writing and editing the contest
*Note: In case I receive any donations for the contest, the payout percentages apply to the donation itself as well.
Judges
This week the judge of the Constrained Writing Contest is @eriesunkite, and she is responsible for picking the winners on her own discretion, but her and I both promise she will try and be as objective as possible.
What's that I hear? You wish to be a judge too? Well look no further!
To apply for a judge and make up your own rules, simply send @svashta a hearty hello on steemit.chat.
*Disclaimer: I will only allow fellow writers as judges to keep the competition high quality.
Deadline
- Entries are accepted until this post's payout
- Your entry post must be newer than this post
At this point I would like to note I will be absent until the 20th of February, perhaps even the 21st. This unfortunately means I might not be able to read your entries and comment on your stories until I return. When I do, however, I promise to read through all the entries prior to consulting with @erisunkite and announcing the winners! :D
good to see things like ths on steemit
So very happy to hear you like the idea! :D
Also, thanks for keeping up with my blog! ^^
Yay!! Grats to all the winners! I am honored to know you liked my story @metzli. Congratulations to all the winners. I am glad so many entered. It was a very challenging writing constraint, and I had lots of fun making up a story around it!
The next one looks very challenging as well. I love that the contestants are becoming judges. It makes it even more interesting!
Yes. And it gives you a great excuse to invest a chunk of time on reading.
I'm so very happy to hear you enjoyed it! :D And of course, participated! :D
Yeah, I like it also! Not because I don't need to make all the hard decisions then (although that too), but because it also brings ever something fresh! :D Happy to hear you like this idea of guest judges! :D
Congratulations to all, everyone did a great job! I had so much fun reading everyone's stories. Thank you so much for choosing my story @metzli, I'm looking forward to polish my story-writing skills more in the upcoming contests, and read everyone's new stories too.
Thank you @svashta for giving us wonderful mind-tickling prompts to write on! :)
So very happy to have you on board, @raiserxn! :D Can't wait to see what you come up with next! :D
Always my pleasure! Though much credit goes to guest judges who come up with all the weird (in a good way) constraints :D
You’re very welcome, thanks you for writing.
Here's mine - I could've gone on for days so compressing this was a mission, but fun.
I tried to include some researchable facts too.
here is it - the story of Oi
You've done it already? :D Must be one of the fastest entries in the history of the contest! :D Awesome! :D
Hmm, compressing your story.... why? :P No such thing as an upward limit :P
Thank you for your entry! :D
There is an upward limit when you consider peoples interest/available time threshhold. As for quick... it may lack quality when done at speed but it takes little for me to "go off on one" and write like a maniac 😉
I understand what you mean, yeah! ^^ and agree to some extent, hence why sometimes I intentionally break my stories into parts.
Me too... chapters so to speak. Part of My own (autobio type) is on here ... true story in chapters. Otherwise readers wouldve got back to work, picked kids up etc and left it. Thats where i believe proper books still have the edge.
Proper printed books will always have some sort of an edge on whatever else we come up with in the future. At least for some people, that is. :p
Good writing prompt for this week.
I'm glad that I still have Bulfinch's Mythology and Budge's The gods of the Egyptians on my shelves.
That already sounds like it's going to be awesome! Can't wait! :D
My submission.
Hello! Just found you, and pretty new to Steemit. Poking around and love the constrained writing concept. I imagine each contest runs until the post expirs... 7 days right? Will keep my eye out for the next one ;)
Hey! :D So very happy to hear you're interested! :D
Yeap! 7 days for each contest! :D
I'm usually very dilligent and post the winners and the new contest an hour or two after it ends... but I've been away on vacation now, and just got home, so I'm late. :3
Expect a new contest post today! ;D Or tomorrow, if things don't quite work out as intended :3
perfect, i'll keep my eyes peeled
Nice topic man!
I am not entering the following story to the competition as it was written long before this competition, but based on the topic you might be interested in reading it just for the sake of reading. Here you go: The Forced Explorer Serge, it is a story which includes Buddha and a few different times and spaces written by our writer Jan.
Oh! :D Awesome :D Will give it a read for sure :D
Yaaay! Congrats to the winners! Hmm, I'm excited to do this week's prompt. 😃
And I'm excited to see what you come up with! :D
@moneyinfant has added your contest to the list Steemit Writing Contests: Issue #19. The list is updated on a daily basis and your contest will remain on the list until its expiration - there's nothing you need to do.
The list was created to save writers the excessive amount of time spent searching through the #contest tag for writing contests. Now they can just come to the list each day, see new contests and use their time doing what they love - writing.
If you'd like to help spread the word about the Steemit Writing Contest List I'd really appreciate a resteem, but it certainly isn't necessary. The project is simply meant to help writers save time and contest creators attract more contestants.
P.S. If you know of any contests I've missed I'd love to hear about them. Thanks!
I have a Children's Book Give-Away on my blog. Not quite a contest, all you need it to comment to participate.
I added a call to action in the upcoming Writing Contest List. It's a wonderful thing you're doing, and only takes a minute for people to help out. Thanks for letting me know about it. And I resteemed and upvoted, but you can give the book to one of the children in your network if I win, my kids have loads of books already :)
great blog keep up my friend @svashta