55 word story contest by Aggroed

in #contest7 years ago (edited)

THE MISUNDERSTOOD FATHER

And there I was, faced with the very thing I feared the most.

My senses heightened and my heart thumped loudly as I dodged strikes that would end me in an instant.

It wasn’t the strikes that frightened me. But that they were dealt by my son.

Then I confessed, “Luke, I am your father.”

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