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RE: 50 Word Micro-Fiction Competition – Win SBI Shares

in #contest6 years ago

Here is my entry! I was afraid of giving it a title, because my story came to EXACTLY 50 words! hahahahaha

so - untitled ;)

2nd row from the bottom, 3rd window in.

I see you. Peeking out, your curtain drawn just enough for one eye.

Will we escape our secret suffering?

Remembering your SOS - torn cardboard sheet, pressed against the glass, lipstick-red letters barely visible.

Did anyone see? Probably not.

But I did.

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I love the complexity of life you have captured in your enticing little 50-word story!