RE: STEEMIT HAIKU CONTEST # WEEK 13: (Original Contest)

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hungry-nomad (54)in #contest • 7 years ago (edited)

'He's My World'

He smiles like flower
His kiss feels like spring
He's the world to me!

7 years ago in #contest by hungry-nomad (54)

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moonleesteem (59) 7 years ago

Welcome, @hungry-nomad
This is a very good poem, we enjoyed reading it... but
it is not a Haiku... the first line has to many syllables in
it. Please check

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hungry-nomad (54) 7 years ago

I made the correction.Please do check and let me know 🙂

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moonleesteem (59) 7 years ago

Ok... good to go.
Good Luck 🍀

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