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RE: NEWBIE/PLANKTON/REDFISH SUPPORT CONTEST-300 STEEM POWER FOR GRABS

in #contest7 years ago

The sky rumbled severely momentarily leaving behind heart sickening flashes....
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I darted up the stairs like lightening with ears like that of a rabbit; sure i heard a scream! Couldn't be mistaken whatsoever!....
Help, she cried!!!
Oh no! "Fred" i gasped.... Not her!
It was a familiar figure; freckled but firm
"get the hell off my sister; you old hag"
"shut the hell up" he barked
Bang! came the thud that had him sprawled across the floor...
Arrrhh!!! he groaned; there, i clutched the knife intensely and dang!!! buried it deep in his abdomen.....
A sharp cry emerged; lasted just a second then "thump" came the sound, everything went numb.
Liquid wasn't omitted or would i rather call it blood? It splattered as i dipped a foot to get across.
There she sat trembling from fear, her garment adorned in shreds.... She smelled sour.
"it's gone" she mumbled in tears
I slid a finger between; and off it came with some stain....
She Was "DEFILED"

Knock! Knock! Knock!
Guess that's the "law"
Where were you when the devil lurked around?

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😥😥 Why? Why?

"It's gone." she mumbled in tears

Life's been so unfair to a lot of people @lightoj

I know! There's just too many struggles in the world today.

Most definitely; we tend to have more increase on a daily basis

We need to help ourselves! Be aware of people around us! Most people hides their imperfections, because of shame!

Truth is 85% of people barely have the opportunity to voice out their pain......... They end up being trampled upon continuosly; but then there's a limit to what they can take because they finally get to loose "tolerance" and just then, you will realize the law exists...... It will come knocking; demanding to know the reason behind the chaos 😢

One thing about abuse is, the victims hardly open up for fear of shame. But the abuser screams at the slightest opposition.

The old hag got what he deserved

Sure he did, though he pushed the innocent girl into the hands of the law

Oooh! What an experience

Stories like this are one of reasons I do say 'men are scum'

I loved what he did to the hag..
He sure deserves it..

Mainwhile I love the story @joyart.
I even wished it was longer.l, because I would like to know what happened next, if the victim got healed by moving on or she became reticent after that situation. And did she hated men after that?

Thanks dear for showing your appreciation...... I might not be opportuned to complete the story, however let's hope they'll be some other contest, where I'll get to finish up.

Put you can make it a post on your blog..
It's allowed, and we would love to read that.

Uhmmm.... I'll look out for that

If only he arrived on time😥...

There's always an if😢