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RE: 50 Word Micro-Fiction Competition – Win SBI Shares

in #contest6 years ago

An Ill-Timed Step

Food was scarce. Soon Lena must brave reality.
She peeled aside the curtain and inspected the lifeless street. Shattered cement, burnt cars, only the opposite building intact.
It was silent, safe; she would hurry.
Her courage minute, she stepped outside... no time for regrets as the gunfire began once more.


Thank you for hosting a lovely little contest! :D I love fifty-word stories, though when I do them they are usually become fifty-word prologues, haha! Perhaps @jayna and the fifty-worders would be interested in this too? ~waves hello~

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Thanks so much for your entry- brilliant piece- like a held breath before that explosive end!
Thanks for signposting me to @jayna too - I hadn't bumped into the fifty-worders yet - very glad to find them! E x

Thanks for the heads up, @kaelci. I will mention the contest in the next #fiftywords post this weekend.

Hi @jayna! Thank you so much for popping in and for the resteem- much appreciated!
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