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RE: STACH Short Story Contest #10: 199 words-10SBD prize pool!

in #contest7 years ago

Disappointment

Michel and Alex were great friends when they met Ann. She was a beautiful girl who studied finance at the same university as Michel.

The first time Michel saw Ann was in math classes, he liked it instantly and invited her to have a coffee. From that day Michel was always accompanied by Ann, and became his girlfriend.

One day Michel takes advantage of the fact that Alex, his best friend, moves to the city to introduce him to Ann. So he invited them both to dinner, the evening was great and to Michel's surprise, Alex and Ann got along very well.

The weeks passed and Michel noticed that his girlfriend for some time always had an excuse not to see him, this worried Michel a lot.

One day he decided to appear in the apartment of his friend Alex to ask for advice, when he knocked on the door, Ann opened him wearing Alex's shirt. Michel realized at that moment that his best friend and his girlfriend cheated him. Michel pushed Ann out of the door and hit Alex, then left the apartment. They both broke his heart.

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Very good, I like!