You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: VDUX Happy Haiku Contest!!!View the full contextView the direct parentvdux (60)in #contest • 6 years ago Cool! Change to "Let them be seen for miles" to fit 7 syllable 2nd line?
Okay, I did what you suggest but there seemed to be only 6 syllables in line 2?
Mea culpa. Ugh. You were right all along.
Did you to leave your smile on this post?
unless miles is said in Cali slang which makes it two syllables
Mi uls