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RE: STEEMIT HAIKU CONTEST # WEEK 15: (Original Contest)
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Suicide
How good it must be
To bear all the pain at once
Then never again
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Suicide
How good it must be
To bear all the pain at once
Then never again
Beautiful, BUT:
Remorse
How can you know that
you won´t feel the eternal
flames´ licking remorse? 😉
Clever haiku ... great word play.
Thank you!
Yes, I´m pleased as punch with that one. 😎
Welcome @zachaizelle0813,
Very Poetic and real... we enjoyed it
Good Luck 🍀
Thank you very much for warm welcome @moonleesteem 💕
My first time to join this contest. 😥
This is beautiful! This haiku is like a pebble dropped in a pond, it's ripples can reach far beyond its original words <3
Thank you @calluna 💗💗💗
A heart shattered. Great haiku:0
Indeed, a shattered heart that never appreciated by the one she loved.
Thanks @prydefoltz 💕