its ok but i can tell u are new! u need to put more images between each poragrapoh, like after every #1 on this list show a new image! its too much text almost hurts ur eyes top just see al;l text wall no images except just oen at the end, so add more images, edit it add mages and add a better personal story

we all knwpo abut basic facst like thios, we want to hear aboput YOU and YOUR life!

give us more personal stuff show pghotos f ur city etc etc just make ut mroe pesonal and u will earn mor! we already have plenty of blogs like this we ned unqieu stuff now!

But GOOD effort and if u post everyday and KEEP posting you WILl start earning good money!