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RE: The Future of Privacy

in #crypto7 years ago

Hey mrfox, I really enjoyed reading this article about Verge! I also learned a lot from it.

I have some tips in tricks for formatting your articles to make it easier to read:

  1. use images: try and more images to your articles because having a visual representation really helps the readers

  2. Split the paragraphs up more: You should try and split the paragraphs up more so that it is easier to read because in this article reading a couple of long paragraphs can be not as fun to read. If you split the pargraphs up more into smaller senteces, it will be easier to read and comprehend

  3. Shorten: I know having long articles is great, but when it is on a topic of a certain crypto, make it basic and then gradually get more detailed. But shortening your article is good because each paragraph took a long time to read which is harder to process for the readers.

Please don't take this as hating because I am just trying to give construction criticism so that it is easier to read.

I really enjoyed your article and be sure to check my article and look at the way I format and then give me some constructive criticism so we can both learn here on Steemit!