Sure I like it, it reminds me of Dream Theater. But if I can say what's missing to my ears is the melody line all along starting around the 38 - 41 sec. announcing a little what is to come at 47 and keeping a lead melody till the solo and after it to end the song. This is just my opinion and tastes and colors are the choice of each other. But to keep the audience awaken it will be worth a try. Just a cool phrasing with some space between the phrases no need to go full technics but more about feeling, a wha filter will gives a lot. To captivate a little more attention. But really it is good and in place. Bravo.