Awesome pages! I love these more than the Green Lantern samples. I think your inks here really do a great job with different line weights. There's a sense of foreground, middle ground, background, and scale that the GL pages were lacking a little. Which one is more recent? Just curious.
These tests and your synopsis are solid. Pursue it if it's the story you're most in love with right now! I'll definitely be following and upvoting all the way.