TANGLED UP Original Comic, Art Process

in #drawing6 years ago (edited)

Tangled Up












Original Script

Tangled up

Once upon a time there was a sea creature named the Octopus.

He lived in a long and gigantic ocean, swimming through the waves. He felt lonely as he swam through the lonely sea

Until one day the octopus met an another of "it's kind" but it was only just a plastic bag. But he was so mezmerized by it, the lonely one grabbed it traveling through the ocean finally having a friend.

In denial that maybe it was all just a lie. He kept on going about with his new friend.

Until his tentacles have gotten stuck to his mate. He cried out help especially to his own love but it won't let go.

He was all tangled up.

He didn't want to let go either, but it hurts so much to hang on.

Until one day a human came and tried to help

Thoughts

Hewwo everyone in the whole universe who is reading in this. I was experimenting on stupid things because I haven't been drawing the ocean for like.. Ever so yeah why not experiment LOL

While I am getting high (not really my brain is overacting with stupid ideas dont do drugs) I made up this stupid story about an octopus falling in love with a plastic bag with a weird ass cliche'd message to "pls stop poluting the ocean :(" and some other stuff.

Up there is just the original script because I really don't like to put dialogue or narration because when I keep reading it I keep.. Cringing at it? I'm not good with words, I'll try to make a epilogue.. Maybe not LEL

Process

FAQ:
Program: ibispaint
Tool: my fingers and my phone Lg x Power
Time: 7 hours 5 minutes













Sketch.

And then i just color it in, like this





Coloring it with lineless art and cel shaded.

Me love the colors of it :) and I'm proud of it.

And that's all for today.

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Aawww.. I love your little octopus @maya525. So sad that his friend is not an octopus but the dreaded plastic bag. And I am so glad to see the human helping the octopus, I was half worried he might catch the octopus :P. Thank you so much for sharing the process too and your thoughts on how you came up with this idea. I don't think there is anything stupid about this @maya525. It is the smartest idea anyone can think of and you did, above the rest :) I love the sea bubbles and tortoise too :) It is sad how polluted our environment has become. I hope that the current and next generations can really help stop the pollution by acting today.

Thankyou very much marbleyyy Im so glad youve enjoyef my short comic of my lil octopus thank you so much ^~^

I love this...he is so cute, our sad little octopus. This story conveys alot of meaning. We humans accept a lot of bad stuffs all because we don't want to be alone, at the end we feel all choked up and entangled. Some have even lost their lives in this process.

I also love your subtle reference to pollution which is a big problem. We don't want lonely octopuses getting their hearts broken...lol.
Great story telling skills, few words but you got the message across. Well done @maya525, you did justice to this one.

Well done :D and yess the poor octopus boi needs to not be heartbroken. I am speechless to be honest XD

And thankies cheekah!!

Thank you for this story...it would be a hit with the children i teach.

Ah thats interesting I hope they like it XD or atleast remember my name or something ahahaha

I would let you know how it goes, they must remember your name. I love the name by the way.

I made up this stupid story about an octopus falling in love with a plastic bag with a weird ass cliche'd message to "pls stop poluting the ocean :(" and some other stuff.

I love this message you tried to convey. And you have conveyed it into a story with cute little ortopus. This is a good story for kids and start to educate them.
Thank you for sharing with us on how to start your art story step by step. And the final piece is beautiful after you can colored it. Hope to see more of your work @maya525

Ayyyyy thanks @oliviackl !!! Appriciate your kind words!! And ooh I hope I can tell the story to children heueheu well.. I am a child.. Heuehueh

And no problemo!! Just doin my job

Are you kidding? You are a child? How old are you. Your art work is so awesome. Bright future in ahead of you.

Uhhh I mean like a minor or not an adult but I'm 15 XD

Sometimes when I do weird/questionable things my friend likes to say that I'm high so guess we're all high sometimes//no

But ahh I relate at cringing at your own writing part I'm like that a lot with my own comics but not that much when I try to make funny(or at least I hope it's funny) comics but when I try to make something deep and emotional I'm just "oh god what am I even doing" at it

Anyway, great job on the comic Maya~!!! RIP that moment when a plastic bag has a better love life than you

Yes were all high from art weed XD

An d yeah writing stuff is cringy if were trying to be deep except when im doin it with friends.

HAHWHWWHHAHWHAAHHAHAH Omg yes agree

WOOOOW, this comic is awesome Maya. I love it, is so tenderness and lovely, VERY THANKS for sharing this things.

Colors, the look of characters, universe, your aesthetics, and your whole concept is beautiful.

Your art is original...

AaaaaAAAA THANKS!! I'm glad you liked every part of the illustration including the little details and aesthetics and colorss aaaa I appreciate it! ❤❤

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Hello nice little comic story it will be lovely to read to a child. I like the pictures they looks so cute:)

AAAAA thanks drawmeaship and awweee yess thanks! Drawing them is a pain XD I appreciate it

Cute comic! Art is very good :)

Thankyou!!