I think both art have their own charms, don't knock off cute and adorable art yo! XD
However I realise that you have a vision of what you want to convey, and I'm glad that you feel closer to what you are trying to achieve :D.
                           
Today's art is indeed nicer and I like how you created the effect of lighting and shadow here. And the idea itself is more exciting, a scene where the matron is taking the main character to their room. You drew her gown very nicely as well ^_^.