Asking for some advice

in #dsound6 years ago (edited)


Wow! So much time have passed since my last post, almost half a year! I've been to focused on studying, but today I need your help!

As I announced in my last post, i do music (pretty bad music), but I train myself, and i'm actually doing another track,
It's not the perfect music. But I can see that I improved myself.

But the most I hear this track, the more I wonder about the style, the sound, etc...
I didn't choosed any special style of music, but I think that the music isn't well balanced.
Of course it's normal (especially for me!) to have difficulties in music creation.
So I'm requesting your advices on my current work! I'd like to know If you think I'm on the good track,
If the music or one instrument is too loud, if the rythm is too fast, too slow...

Just answer me in comments, it would be very nice!

And here is my previous work:


► Listen on DSound
► Listen from source (IPFS)
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