Excellent poem. I'm also a member of #Promo-Mentors, so I'll have to look you up. I love epic poems, ballads, lyric narratives, especially in the speculative genres. You might be interested in my Steem Monsters poem "The Ballad of the Crustacean King."

https://steemit.com/poetry/@blockurator/poetry-sunday-the-ballad-of-the-crustacean-king-a-steem-monsters-fiction-writing-contest-entry-98ce88980efbb

Thanks for promoting poetry.