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RE: Meet me in the cosmic sea [Day 35½]

in #dsound • 7 years ago

your voice of boiling cloud

In the audio it says purple cloud ..I think

Fourth stanza, fourth line could be "by wind your words were tossed." shorter and lighter. and also the second line could use a touch, maybe removing the "the".

thethe ? really?!
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