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RE: Your Servant

in #erotica5 years ago

Hmmm... very nice. I may be completely off, but here's my interpretation:
It's a poetically inclined young man, torn apart by love and desire, writing to a sweet girl who has got his mind and heart twisted with her beauty.
However, the young girl doesn't share the passion of the poet in love. She reads this letter from him to her girlfriends, giggling together at the pathetic boy likening himself to an animal about to devour all of them. Oh, how he's yearning for the kisses, which she could get from each of her girlfriends without all this wordy nonsense around it. But maybe she can send him some false hope, something he can hold on to, only to be used against him eventually....

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Thanks for your reply @kinkytales. Yes, it is from the point of view of a man who is infatuated with a beautiful girl. Now, the girl is a good person and she seeks love not lust and the man knows that and he is pretending to be in love with her and he writes his passion in the form of poetic love but he lusts after her and he knows that if her approached her in the name of love, he has a chance but the girl is smart and she is no fool to fall into this trap. She doesn't make fun of him and that is why the thought of making her another of his conquests is all the more exciting for him. She doesn't do anything, she is silent about this all. He goes into this BDSM mode kind of way to get her to have sex so that he can be the boss and control her. it is kind of manipulative. Anyway that's the idea behind it. Thanks for reading my piece.

Well, it's the other way round than what I thought. Still, there is this manipulative part in it, which I like a lot.