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RE: MY BRAIN CHILD

in #esteem6 years ago

I am a mother to many children,
stretch marks in my brain to prove it.

Such a powerful but simple metaphor @abmakko. Simple may be the wrong word, impactful.... I don't know if that is a word lol, but that is the impression that imagery gives, impact. Love it!

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Thanks for your insight... sometimes I think I might sound too raw, I almost scrapped that line off. thankfully I kept it.. thanks for enjoying it. :-)