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RE: How & Why Should use eSteem mobile app v2.0.6?

in #esteem6 years ago

Hello @face2face,

Thank you for your contribution. The post contains a lot of information about features and uses of the application. It's more like a step to step tutorial of the eSteem app. I appreciate the effort used to create those mock-ups. Well-done!

I like how you start the introduction section. You shared your past experiences, But afterward, all you shared are features and its uses. To make your post better, You could share more on your thoughts about those features and your experiences using the application.

On the presentation side, There were serious grammar, style and punctuation issues. I'd recommend a more check for your future texts. Also, you could use some grammar assistance services (Grammarly or Hemingway) to improve your texts.

Thank you!

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Thank you for your review, @tykee! Keep up the good work!