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RE: @familyprotection is now coming to a town near you!

in #familyprotection • 7 years ago

I love it. I only have 1 suggestion and please do not take it the wrong way. Consider changing the word CAN NOT to WILL NOT. It has more of a powerful meaning and suggests that no matter what they throw at us we will continue. The words can not just are not as powerful. Otherwise I LOVE IT!!!!

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     7 years ago 

    Exactly the kind of advice I need, thank you I will edit it asap. Going to print a heap of them tonight and then it's Postman-pat time :)

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