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RE: Fireflies - Chapter 28

in #fantasy6 years ago

So I am having trouble finding the words Dreemie. This chapter has touched my heart in ways you can never imagine.. I have a sense of longing in my own life. I love this little candid moment between them and I understand the emotions you are feeling writing this because I now feel them too.

Dammit Dreem I hate feeling feelings!!! Why you do this to me??? My dark heart just can't take it!!!

Almost to the conclusion love, I'm so freaking excited to see how this will end and I'm still hoping for Derek to get his ass whooped!!! Ya heard that @enginewitty and @quirky.countess!!! Derek's gonna be swimmin' with the fishies!!!! Bwahahahaha

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I hope Derek gets his ass whooped too. But still holding my breath, and not counting my fishes, till he's swimming with them. Or better still drowning with them.

Right!!! I'm holding my breath too @kiwideb ... this is stressful lol.. you expect stories to have a good ending but anything other than him getting his ass whooped would be bad right? I mean, I can think of maybe a few scenarios but then that just might be silly. He has to go down!!

Fingers crossed!

So many different scenarios!!!! This mind was a whirlwind for too long hahahaha

hahahahaha wow!!!! what a powerful metaphor that was!!!!

I'm not sure about powerful. I was more going for the hahaha, so glad I succeeded. I definitely mixed them up though!

ROFLLL powerfully funny????? hehehehehehe

oh.... there is an early release of chapter 29!!! enjoy :)

Ooh ooh, off to look...

What if the bad guy wins in this movie and he eats Talia for breakfast along with Bryd?

He is pretty strong. and we already know he's the ultimate predator

I would never be too sure- that @dreemsteem is a loose cannon sometimes!

I knew you would understand it all, Monch.
Now you know why there was tears.

I'm almost done!!!! So close.
Just taking a break and rubbing my neck... I'll talk to you very soon!!!!