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Over time, James grew up. He was strong and tall and friendly. The people of Hemlin loved him even while they thought he might be a bit off. For James told everyone in Hemlin he would one day climb The Owl.

And this is the perfect way to close a chapter. A beautiful, evocative paragraph, with a hook at the end of it.

Thank you very much for sharing.

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bigpanda (66) 7 years ago

Thanks @flashfiction.

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earthangel (47) 7 years ago

Interesting story. Wonder what is at the top of the mountain and the grandmother seems to be a mischievious woman. The story really piqued my interest. Your stories are always good @bigpanda. You just got a follow.

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bigpanda (66) 7 years ago

Thanks @earthangel. I too am excited to see what the grandmother has up her sleeve.

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maksym7 (50) 7 years ago

My dear friend, @bigpanda!
What on this mountain? When the hero will get on it ??

Very interesting!!!

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bigpanda (66) 7 years ago

Thanks @maksym7. How did you know I love the Simpsons?

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maksym7 (50) 7 years ago

I did not know that you like the Simpsons. I love them very much too !!!

Given the coincidence with avatars))))) I think that there is little in common between us)))))

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bigpanda (66) 7 years ago

Hahahaha. That's great!

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askmarie (37) 7 years ago

Your story reeled me in. "And the mountain, for the most part, left them alone as well." Very ominous and yet such a simple line! Well done.

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bigpanda (66) 7 years ago

Thanks so much @askmarie

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sophiaessoh (42) 7 years ago

I read the hunt part 15
And i decided to come and start from part one.
I'm about to read all of them
Your stories are very intriguing
Almost as though im watching it in a tv

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bigpanda (66) 7 years ago

Thanks! I'm so glad you find them intriguing.

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